January 21, 2010

  • False Rhapsody

    I have nothing to say,
    nothing to rhyme.
    I have so much to hate
    but so little time.
    All I have of late
    is too trite to write
    sans a spine.
    This is my life,
    yet nothing is mine.
    I despise each line
    I write from this heart,
    from this rotten mind,
    this false rhapsody of art.

    Spark 8!

Comments (8)

  • very great poem.. :)

  • hate is the definition of art these days
    "because we love, everything we hate"
    having nothing seems to be the everything these days
    "because when we have nothing, is when we are free to do everything"
    so this rhapsody isnt too far from the truth at all
    according to most.

  • you lie!

  • Unexcitable, of body and of mind
    Unintelligible, thoughts of the scrambled kind

    Such is the life of
    Full stomached, empty hearted, fully educated, poorly construted humankinds

  • Many lines in this poem really are nice. I have read your poem 3 times now and it flows well and shows a lot of emotion. I think my favorite part is "All I have of late ... is too trite to write." GREAT work and thanks for sharing. 

  • Happy 2010 girl!

    I've been keeping up with your posts but haven't been on in forever.  I hope you are still enjoying your schooling and being out on your own!

    I send you light and love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share

    If you'd like to read an awesome book get Mike Dooley's Infinite Possibilities, The Art of Manifesting Your Dreams and check out Notes from Universe on http://www.tut.com. 
    AWESOME!

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